Visual Guide: Fragments and Transformations
Introduction: Mapping the Unmappable
Book 2 is complicated. Seventeen fragments floating in void. Six transformations happening across ninety days. 125 survivors scattered then gathered. The Ancient Fragment appearing Week 2.
How do you visualize that?
You can’t draw traditional map. There’s no geography. Just rocks floating in nothing with distances changing based on void-currents.
But you can map:
- Fragment relationships (which ones connect via void-ships)
- Transformation timeline (when each of The Six changes)
- Population distribution (where the 125 ended up)
- Survival progression (casualties over ninety days)
This is your visual guide to Book 2. Not traditional maps. Conceptual diagrams.
Because sometimes the best way to understand chaos is organized visualization.
Diagram 1: The Seventeen Fragments (Spatial Relationship)
Important: Fragments don’t have fixed positions. Void-currents shift them. But relative relationships stayed consistent.
FRAGMENT LAYOUT (Post-Sundering, Day 3)
Fragment 1 (Zephyrion)
[8 Aurans]
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Fragment 2 ---- Fragment 0 ---- Fragment 3
(Tarak) (NEXUS - (Nerai)
[12 Scalians] UNINHABITABLE) [7 Hydrans]
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Fragment 4 ---- Fragment 5 ---- Fragment 6
(Ronan) (Nyx) (Shahrzad)
[14 Chlorans] [9 Cimmerians] [11 Mauves]
[Fragments 7-16 scattered in outer void - 64 survivors total]
Fragment 17 (ANCIENT)
[The Travelers - Week 2]
[No permanent residents]
Key spatial notes:
- Fragment 0 (Nexus): Center. Where Sundering originated. Quarantined—Forgotten One remains there.
- Fragments 1-6: Ring around Nexus. God-fragments (moon-essence infused).
- Fragments 7-16: Outer scatter. Less stable. Smaller. Mixed populations.
- Fragment 17: Discovered Week 2. Position shifts (mobile via Traveler technology).
Void-ship routes (Post-Week 2):
All fragments connected to Fragment 17 (hub). Fragment 17 connected to all others. Star pattern with Ancient Fragment as center.
Why this matters: Fragment 17 becomes transit hub. Survivors from Fragments 7-16 evacuate to Fragment 4 (Ronan’s domain—most stable). Fragment 17 enables that movement.
Diagram 2: Population Movement (Days 1-90)
Visual representation of survivor concentration over time:
POST-SUNDERING POPULATION DISTRIBUTION
DAY 1:
Fragment 1: 8 | Fragment 7: 20 | Fragment 13: 6
Fragment 2: 12 | Fragment 8: 15 | Fragment 14: 4
Fragment 3: 7 | Fragment 9: 23 | Fragment 15: 7
Fragment 4: 14 | Fragment 10: 11 | Fragment 16: 5
Fragment 5: 9 | Fragment 11: 9 |
Fragment 6: 11 | Fragment 12: 12 |
Fragment 17: 0 (not discovered yet)
TOTAL: 173 survivors across 16 fragments
DAY 30 (Post-Ancient Fragment Contact):
Fragment 1: 8 | Fragment 7: 13 | Fragment 13: 4
Fragment 2: 12 | Fragment 8: 11 | Fragment 14: 3
Fragment 3: 7 | Fragment 9: 17 | Fragment 15: 5
Fragment 4: 14 | Fragment 10: 8 | Fragment 16: 4
Fragment 5: 9 | Fragment 11: 7 |
Fragment 6: 11 | Fragment 12: 9 |
Fragment 17: 0 (transit hub)
TOTAL: 142 survivors (31 Surrendered Days 1-30)
DAY 60 (Consolidation):
Fragment 1: 8 | Fragments 7-16: EVACUATED
Fragment 2: 12 | (survivors moved to Fragment 4)
Fragment 3: 7 |
Fragment 4: 67 | [Includes original 14 + 53 from outer fragments]
Fragment 5: 9 |
Fragment 6: 11 |
Fragment 17: 0 (transit hub)
TOTAL: 131 survivors (11 more Surrendered Days 31-60)
DAY 90 (Final):
Fragment 1: 8 | All outer fragments: ABANDONED
Fragment 2: 12 | (ecosystems collapsed)
Fragment 3: 7 |
Fragment 4: 61 | [6 Surrendered Days 61-67]
Fragment 5: 9 |
Fragment 6: 11 |
Fragment 17: Travelers (preparing for Book 3 merger)
TOTAL: 125 survivors (Final count)
Movement pattern: Outer → Inner. Unstable → Stable. Fragments 7-16 abandoned by Day 60 (ecosystems failed). Fragment 4 becomes primary settlement (Ronan’s garden sustains largest population).
Diagram 3: Transformation Timeline (The Six)
Visual timeline showing when each transformation occurred:
THE SIX TRANSFORMATIONS (Days 1-90)
DAY 1 ●━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━ DAY 90
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SUNDERING COMPLETE
All six maintaining fragments through constant channeling
DAY 40 ●━━━━━━━━━━●━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━ DAY 90
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THRESHOLD
Physical strain visible. Transformations imminent.
DAY 50 ●━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━●━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━ DAY 90
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NERAI → Water (First transformation)
Sets pattern for others
DAY 53 ●━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━●━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━ DAY 90
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Tarak → Fire (Second transformation)
DAY 60 ●━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━●━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━ DAY 90
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ZEPHYRION → Air (Third transformation)
DAY 70 ●━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━●━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━ DAY 90
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Ronan → Garden/Earth (Fourth transformation)
Midpoint—escalation visible
DAY 80 ●━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━●━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━ DAY 90
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Shahrzad → Probability/Dream (Fifth)
DAY 90 ●━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━●━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━● DAY 90
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NYX → Mathematics/Shadow (Final)
THE FOUNDATION COMPLETE
Pattern notes:
- First 40 days: Maintenance phase (no transformations, just strain)
- Days 50-70: Cascade (four transformations in twenty days)
- Days 71-90: Completion (two final transformations)
- Acceleration visible: Gap between transformations shrinks. First = Day 50. Final = Day 90. Forty days total transformation period.
Diagram 4: Casualty Breakdown (173 → 125)
Visual representation of attrition across ninety days:
SURVIVOR ATTRITION (Post-Sundering)
STARTING: 173 survivors ████████████████████████████████████████████████
(Day 1 post-Sundering)
WEEK 1: 165 survivors ██████████████████████████████████████████████
(8 Surrendered - mostly elderly)
WEEK 2: 156 survivors ████████████████████████████████████████████
(9 Surrendered - grief + isolation)
WEEK 3: 149 survivors ██████████████████████████████████████████
(7 Surrendered - Ancient Fragment discovered
but some already too exhausted)
WEEK 4: 142 survivors ████████████████████████████████████████
(7 Surrendered - transformation fear)
WEEK 6: 138 survivors ██████████████████████████████████████
(4 Surrendered - void-adaptation resistance)
WEEK 8: 134 survivors ████████████████████████████████████
(4 Surrendered)
WEEK 10: 131 survivors ██████████████████████████████████
(3 Surrendered - final evacuations from outer fragments)
WEEK 12: 125 survivors ████████████████████████████████
(6 Surrendered Days 61-67)
NO MORE SURRENDERS AFTER DAY 67
Final 125 = COMMITTED SURVIVORS
FINAL: 125 survivors ████████████████████████████████
(48 total Surrendered over 67 days)
(27.7% attrition rate)
Attrition pattern:
- Heaviest losses: Weeks 1-4 (31 Surrendered)
- Stabilization: Weeks 5-8 (11 Surrendered)
- Final decisions: Week 9-10 (6 Surrendered)
- Commitment: Day 68+ (Zero Surrenders)
Why pattern matters: Early Surrenders = immediate grief response. Middle Surrenders = transformation resistance. Late Surrenders = final assessments. After Day 67, everyone remaining had decided to persist.
Diagram 5: The Foundation Formation (Elemental Interconnection)
Visual representation of how The Six’s elements connect:
THE FOUNDATION (Post-Day 90)
ZEPHYRION
(AIR)
Breath/Movement
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Tarak ─────────────┼─────────────── NERAI
(FIRE) | (WATER)
Warmth/Energy THE SIX Flow/Adaptation
UNIFIED
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└────── Ronan ─────┴────── Shahrzad ───┘
(EARTH/LIFE) (DREAM/REALITY)
Growth/Form Possibility/Choice
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└──── NYX ────────┘
(SHADOW/MATH)
Pattern/Truth
INTERCONNECTION:
- Air + Water = Weather (Zephyrion + Nerai)
- Fire + Earth = Volcanic growth (Tarak + Ronan)
- Dream + Shadow = Reality-structure (Shahrzad + Nyx)
- All six = Unified Foundation supporting New Eclipsia (Book 3)
Why this matters: The Six don’t function independently. They’re interconnected system. Each element supports others. Remove one, all collapse. That’s why all six transformations were necessary.
Diagram 6: Void-Ship Routes (Week 2+)
Visual representation of transportation network:
VOID-SHIP NETWORK (Post-Week 2)
F1 ←─────────┐
↓ │
└→ F17 ←────┤
│
F2 ←─────────┤
↓ │
└→ F17 ←────┤ F17 = ANCIENT FRAGMENT
│ (Transit Hub)
F3 ←─────────┤
↓ │ All routes pass through F17
└→ F17 ←────┤ No direct fragment-to-fragment travel
│ (Void too dangerous)
F4 ←─────────┤
↓ │
└→ F17 ←────┤
│
F5 ←─────────┤
↓ │
└→ F17 ←────┤
│
F6 ←─────────┤
↓ │
└→ F17 ←────┤
│
F7-16 ←────────┘
↓
└→ F17 (eventual evacuation to F4)
Hub-and-spoke model. Fragment 17 central. All travel routes through it. Why: Void-navigation requires The Travelers’ technology. They maintain Fragment 17. Their fragment = only safe transit point.
Diagram 7: Transformation Stages (Individual Experience)
What each survivor experiences during void-adaptation:
VOID-ADAPTATION PROGRESSION (All 125 survivors)
DAYS 1-40: STAGE ONE - MARKING CHANGES
┌─────────────────────────────────────────────┐
│ • Racial marks shift color │
│ • Abilities become unstable │
│ • Physical discomfort (hunger, insomnia) │
│ • Psychological: Denial → Bargaining │
│ • Identity: "I'm still [race name]" │
└─────────────────────────────────────────────┘
DAYS 41-70: STAGE TWO - HYBRID EMERGENCE
┌─────────────────────────────────────────────┐
│ • Abilities transforming (multi-elemental) │
│ • Physical mutations visible (skin, eyes) │
│ • Racial identity blurring │
│ • Psychological: Anger → Depression │
│ • Identity: "Am I still me?" │
└─────────────────────────────────────────────┘
DAYS 71-90: STAGE THREE - VOID-TOUCHED
┌─────────────────────────────────────────────┐
│ • Full transformation to hybrid forms │
│ • Original races extinct (as pure forms) │
│ • Multi-elemental abilities stable │
│ • Psychological: Acceptance │
│ • Identity: "I'm Void-Touched/Transformed" │
└─────────────────────────────────────────────┘
DAY 91+: THE TRANSFORMED
┌─────────────────────────────────────────────┐
│ • New unified humanity │
│ • Free from moon-control │
│ • Magic based on will, not birthright │
│ • Psychological: Integration │
│ • Identity: "I'm Human (New Eclipsian)" │
└─────────────────────────────────────────────┘
Parallel transformations: While The Six transform into elements, the 125 transform into hybrid void-adapted humans. Both groups changing simultaneously. Book 2’s core: Universal transformation.
Diagram 8: Book 2 Story Structure
Chapter breakdown with transformation milestones:
BOOK 2: THE SHATTERED VEIL (15 Chapters)
CH 1: Echoes of Eclipse ┐
CH 2: Fire That Doesn't Burn │ ACT ONE: EXHAUSTION
CH 3: Depths Between │ Days 1-40
CH 4: Garden of Ash │ The Six maintaining
CH 5: Pattern Breaks │ No transformations yet
CH 6: Dreamer's Dilemma │ Rising strain
CH 7: First Meeting ┘ Ancient Fragment discovered
CH 8: Garden's Price ┐
CH 9: Convergence │ ACT TWO: CASCADE
CH 10: The Surrendered │ Days 41-70
CH 11: Whispers in Void │ Nerai → Tarak → Zephyrion → Ronan
CH 12: The Expedition ┘ Four transformations
CH 13: Ancient Fragment ┐
CH 14: The Choice │ ACT THREE: COMPLETION
CH 15: Epilogue ┘ Days 71-90
(Watcher's Record) Shahrzad → Nyx
Foundation forms
Three-act structure:
- Act One: Setup (Days 1-40, establish fragments/strain)
- Act Two: Escalation (Days 41-70, four transformations)
- Act Three: Resolution (Days 71-90, Foundation completes)
Each act = thirty days. Each transformation = plot milestone. Structure built on internal change not external action.
How to Use These Diagrams
For readers:
- Before reading Book 2: Review Diagram 1 (fragments layout), Diagram 3 (transformation timeline)
- While reading: Reference Diagram 8 (chapter structure) to track position
- After reading: Study Diagram 5 (Foundation interconnection) to understand The Six’s unified role
For discussions:
- Diagram 2: Understand population movement (why consolidation happened)
- Diagram 4: See casualty breakdown (context for The Surrendered)
- Diagram 7: Track transformation stages (survivor experience)
For Book 3 preparation:
- Diagram 5: Foundation structure (carries into Book 3)
- Diagram 6: Transit network (becomes basis for fragment merger)
Conclusion: Visualizing Transformation
Book 2 is hard to track. Seventeen fragments. Six transformations. 125 survivors. Ninety days.
Diagrams help. Not traditional maps (there’s no geography). But conceptual frameworks.
Understanding where everyone is, when transformations happen, how many Surrendered, and how The Six interconnect—that makes Book 2’s complexity navigable.
Print these diagrams. Reference them. Track the journey.
Because sometimes the best way to understand cosmic horror is organized visual breakdown.
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